It needs more work. There is probably a need for more practice before the challenge to help identify misconceptions. The teacher is going to need to bring out the ideas about parallels and equations using teacher pacing in the middle screens. In particular the what do you notice and the multiple choice screen need class discussion. The wording on the challenge screen and seeking multiple solutions also needs work. I am not certain it matches the ideas you were hoping for in the original.
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